Pictured left is my fourth draft of my DPS. I really like this draft, however it could still be improved. I need to seriously consider if the page furniture I have selected really fits on the page, and I may end up removing this. Also, I don't think the pull quote under the arm of the subject works, so I will probably remove this. Even though I have created symbolism through the page numbers (they are supposed to represent time signatures in sheet music), I feel that this could be confusing to readers. For this reason, I may remove them from my page. I also need to add lines the separate the columns, and follow convention.
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